tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24629995.post7691205742634855888..comments2023-12-11T13:55:07.187+11:00Comments on the deletions: pbhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05488501096578637033noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24629995.post-23547240286466986842009-02-15T02:24:00.000+11:002009-02-15T02:24:00.000+11:00The lines flow like honey, but, as you suggest, th...The lines flow like honey, but, as you suggest, they might flow even better if they floated eccentrically like bees. (The all-nameable again.)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24629995.post-21764261018767424152009-02-14T10:52:00.000+11:002009-02-14T10:52:00.000+11:00p.s. Of course the lineation doesn't hold here in ...p.s. <BR/>Of course the lineation doesn't hold here in bloggo message land - the poem actually floats eccentrically on the pagepbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05488501096578637033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24629995.post-26693075580162451972009-02-14T10:51:00.000+11:002009-02-14T10:51:00.000+11:00Hi Robert,Your reading sounds like fun.Here's ...Hi Robert,<BR/>Your reading sounds like fun.<BR/><BR/>Here's a stanza from the middle of my poem for Kenward Elmslie (when he was in Sydney a few years ago) called 'Rainy Day in May'<BR/><BR/>& the rain fell down,<BR/> too wet, too sombre & grey, <BR/> all afternoon<BR/>but mellifluous tenor,<BR/> you sang and read,<BR/> a Babe Rainbow <BR/> brightening the place up,<BR/> just like (we imagine) at<BR/> Touché’s Salon -<BR/> all those synaesthetic pleasures <BR/> on,<BR/> as it turned out to be,<BR/> your saddest anniversary<BR/><BR/>Pampbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05488501096578637033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24629995.post-38377691346128839822009-02-13T22:55:00.000+11:002009-02-13T22:55:00.000+11:00I read a poem at the open mic recently at the Nigh...I read a poem at the open mic recently at the Nightingale Lounge in New York City that I announced was incomprehensible but at least it was mellifluous. Only as I started reading it turned out not to be so mellifluous. So I started conducting in curvy wavy melliflous movements with my free right arm. How's that for improvising! (From no-account Robert Mueller.)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com